You use music definitely to your advantage for the most part, I get a vague sense of the tone the game is going for once again in the music choices you use. So you've got a good start on that level, just gotta work on pulling me into the world with them too. I like your attempt at delving into different character personalities, though! I get a feeling for who each character kind of is, but at the same time, they're very inactive in the story, and you don't really see what the character's PURPOSE in the story is. And another visual thing in the intro cutscene is that the red text just does NOT look super good against that grey backdrop, which is something worth looking into. Some early game stuff, really quick: I like the effect you're going for, but it needs some revamping the flashing title screen is just too strong of an effect and doesn't land on the eyes super well. Hi Foxowl! Great job on your jam game! I just finished it, and I'll give you some thoughts! Gela’s Windowskins and Windowskin PackĪnd a special thanks to everyone on the Thundaga and Relic Castle Discords for their support and help.
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